strive for personal growth

It is common for people to (it is + 形容词 + for sb. to do sth.是固定句型)have a sense of laziness(laziness”是“lazy”的名词形式,laziness”为抽象名词,不需要使用定冠词“the”,直接说“a sense of laziness”更合适). When we really need to do (need作实义动词时,用法为“need to do sth.”) something that can benefit personal growth ( “benefit for”用法错误,“benefit”作及物动词时,直接跟宾语,应改为“benefit personal growth”) we would love to strive for it. But now I am not as energetic as I used to be. The sluggishness of the brain and the dullness (“brain's sluggishness”表达错误,应改为“the sluggishness of the brain”;“duller”是形容词比较级,这里应使用名词形式“dullness”) lead me to give up easily. Just now, I wrote a new schedule for November and this time I will try my best to make progress in English.

There are forty days leading up to the IEST (“up to”是介词,后面应接名词或代词,应改为“leading up to the IEST”,IEST是缩写 要the). I am overcome with lots of emotions, such as overwhelming (“overwhelm”为动词,这里应该使用名词“overwhelming), depression, expectations, and anxiety

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